tormented-soul's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joe Janitor]

great first upload

The audio was fantastic. That's rare in amateur Flash. The enviroments were well drawn as well. Awesome job.

Like Krimson said... the walking seems a little awkward.. tweens do that. Experiment with some frame by frame..

freedumbring responds:

Aw man thank you so much!

You guys are right, the walk cycles leave a lot to be desired...he looks like hes rollerskating in a couple shots! I've always been a little intimidated of frame by frame animation but now that you mention it, itd probably look a whole lot more organic than the blocky tween walk-cycles I have now. Thank you very much for the advice and thank you for watching!

[A Newgrounds Christmas]

Loved it

I knew it would be cool.. but not this hilarious! Epic win.

Jazza responds:

thanks man, glad it pleased

[Bizzaro Tom: Episode 1]

The Jessica Biel..

.. click her ass and it ripples like Jello gadget was worth 3 stars alone.

Your followers are few but loyal, oh exalted one. Show us more of what planet Krapton has left as it's legacy...

poprock responds:

BiZZaRo ToM thank tormented guy who look like Gollum fuck witch from Snow White.

[Bizzaro Tom Fulp arrival]

Can't wait.

What is the name of the planet you are from?

poprock responds:

Krapton. You pronounce crapped on. Like your face.

Haha. BiZZaRo silly. Like your face.

[A screwed up XMAS]

Good job

Nice use of audio and the eggnog sketch made me LOL. I wish I was this good at Flash at your age. Keep at it!

VioletVulpine responds:

Thanks.

[A Bad Rant]

Ten for lip syncing

Since you mentioned in a previous response that this was for an assignment on lip syncing, that's what I'll grade you on. It was flawless. Were those tweens or mouth comps or what?

Forefox responds:

Thank you. I actually did it frame by frame.

[Lychgate]

Really great effort

The style was kick ass... the fbf animation smooth.. soundtrack was spot on. You deserved daily first.

MarcK responds:

Daily first would have been awesome but I'm sufficiently excited just to have an award.
Thank you!

[Sketchy Friends Dance]

awesomely done

I sat here thru the roller coaster song and the if you were gay song on the front page thinking "Why does NG suck today?" Then I watched this. You, my friend, have single-handedly save the site for today.

TheBoogley responds:

woah, saved the site... wait. I loved the roller coaster one, in fact I'm a fan of everything on the front page. Come on man, where's the love. Give us all a hug... ahh. ;3

[Christmas Isn't Safe]

That was kinda wicked...

I liked it...

Creatus responds:

Just dont start an addiction

[Mario Comes to South Park]

Good idea.. needs development.

It looked really decent... but the audio wasn't quite right. Work on adjusting the volume so it doesn't sound like someone's screaming in a mic (just open the edit sound envelope on the properties for the keyframe.) Add some birds chirping in the back or something so there's not so much dead air between dialogue. Beyond that... kinda short and a little more story would've been cool.. but you've definitely got a neat idea here... just run a little more with it. Love your username by the way. Bobby fucking Jenks man!!

WsoxKillCubs responds:

Yea, I took sound right from episodes actualy... so I don't really know how to get rid of the background sounds when they talk. But I'll think about adding some more sounds in the background to even it all out. :P
-Thanks... and Bobby is fricken unstoppable, damb... he always lets a guy get a lead-off double and then strikes everyone else out! xD